Nine Transformations and Immortality

Personally, I think it's generally okay. There are just some places where you need to make some refinements and be careful. For example, when Li Changsheng gave birth to Yuanying, you actually wrote that Yuanying went to play with the dog and even beat the dog. I almost laughed to death at the time. Overall, it was good.

When will Zhang Yumo return!

I hope Li Changsheng doesn't collapse later!

This book is so inconsistent with its name. Where did the Nine Transformations of Eternal Life appear from? It's better to just name him and ascend to immortality.

The traditional cultivation of immortality is still more to my liking, but I don't know if it will be like other books in the future, and it will be boring.

After reading Chapter 30, it's a no-brainer. The plot, dialogue, action, and fighting are full of loopholes, and many of the plot descriptions are unreasonable and bizarre. There's nothing interesting to watch, I can't stand it anymore

Upgrading is a bit fast! It's over 80 chapters and it's over

It's pretty good-looking, it just needs to be a little more novel.

It's going to be messed up later, everyone, please pay attention.

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