The God of War as a Son-in-Law

So pretty

Nice

Fine

I have been writing this book for several years. I update one episode a day, and sometimes I don't update it at all... When I first read it, I felt it was quite interesting. The content is relatively compact without losing the plot of the story. It is not like some books that are so long-winded and have many chapters without finishing a story paragraph; but later on, the content is not compact, but it feels like there is no story, and it is often passed by in one stroke... Sigh...

It looks good, but the ending is not clear enough. Where did he go to Kunlun? His level is also very high. Ye Lin can do many things to help Ye Lin when he encounters difficulties. Shura's master also doesn't say anything. This ending should show the main characters. What realms are they in? Have they gone to heaven? Ye Lin had too many opportunities from the beginning to the end, and the atomic bomb should not be able to do anything to him!

The plot is okay, but the updates are too slow.

Too slow to follow new trends

The first part is exciting and can be finished before Little Fairy World, but the second part is repetitive.

This book should end when Ye Lin becomes a great sage. It has a perfect ending and there is no point in writing it anymore.

It's really nonsense. If you don't want to write it, forget it. Just end it.