Double Penetration of Immortality: the Horror World Has Become My Back Garden

Cultivation is too complicated. Can't anyone practice the three paths without fear of making mistakes? There is also a description of the Yuanying monks who still need help. I laughed. Who can become a Yuanying without being a genius? It's so easy to bury people and slip away! !

It was pretty good at the beginning, but after chapter 206, it was so ugly that he kept writing about his burdensome girlfriend.

The eunuch novel, forget about the single female protagonist, it's still annoying

Summary: 🙃🙃The male protagonist is trash

This heroine is really annoying

It is extremely poisonous and illogical at all. He clearly knows that the wild night is dangerous, but he does not know that when he returns to the horror world, the opponent can kill him with one sword. He still feels that the opponent has received a wanted order for him. If they had received it, they would have taken action long ago. He only stays in the horror world for a few days at a time and has to go to the world of cultivating immortals. I don't understand. It is really a wisdom.

The first part was okay, but the further you read, the more you can't stand it. The second part feels like the plot is forced to be added. It should be the end, and I still need to write a follow-up.

The giant poison doesn't have much strength. He has to provoke others. Can't he wait until he reaches a higher level and then take him away? He is forcibly reduced to wisdom for the sake of the plot.

Poisonous

If you feel that life is too satisfying, you can watch it. The protagonist does not care about the life and death of the supporting characters, and the plot is extremely contradictory. However, the villains other than the protagonist are well portrayed, and that part of the plot is indeed logical. So what characteristics of the protagonist are you trying to show here, and are you trying to show the evil and selfishness of human nature? It's really awesome that the protagonist can survive, but this is the first time I've seen the protagonist be so dehumanized. The author is great! The staff maker suspected that he had stolen someone else's manuscript and changed the protagonist himself. It was too ugly, very contradictory, and at the same time, the protagonist's final conscience was still being portrayed in the play? Why don't you see if it makes sense☁️? I have understood the limits after being played, so I can save my respect💕haha😃