I Am the Puppet Emperor! From the Start, I'm Invincible!

I personally think there are two main reasons why your book is not very popular. The plot follows one link after another, and I saw dozens of them. You this place. Fighting against the Beiyuan people to save the Queen. The middle span is too big. The plot suddenly changed from compact to flirtatious. Write this kind of novel. Don't be too concerned about keeping your roots. It is a combination of Shuangwen and ancient Chinese. Especially for the Emperor, you have to write something that makes people feel comfortable. The second one is the previous one. I have also read a book. The plots you wrote are too similar to his, but your technique is not that good. But it reflects well. Although the protagonist is growing in strength in the early stage, the growth of his own country's strength can actually be accelerated some more. No need to waste too much time here. You can add some other plots as appropriate. To ensure the length of the article.