Help! What Should I Do If I Dress up as the Heroine of a Sadistic Novel I Wrote?

… After reading it, to be honest, there is some writing but not much. The plot is here and there, jumping out and not connecting well. The characters are so well-drawn that I don't feel that any one person is really outstanding. It can be seen that the author secretly wants to write a strong female protagonist, but among a bunch of villains who are portrayed as bad and stupid, I feel that this female protagonist is also lacking. I can't stand the end of the story. I climbed a tree and overheard the conspiracy. I broke up with the villain on the spot and told my agent: "Yes, I'm not from this world." Although the whole book has more than ninety chapters, I really can't figure out what you want to express? Was this written when the author was twelve or thirteen years old? The ideological level of the main character in this book is just like that of a child. I hope it can be improved.