Red Mansion: the Rise of the Lin Mansion

Three paragraphs I want to say to the author: ① On the Naihe Bridge, a boy had already drank ten bowls of Meng Po soup. Meng Po saw this and stopped him: "That's enough. Stop drinking. What can't you forget?" The boy replied dully: Why hasn't xxx been updated yet? ②"Your Majesty, the princess has been kneeling in the snow for two days, do you still... Want to continue?" "She is finally willing to admit her mistake?" "Princess... Princess has just died." But before she died, she said: "Hurry up and update "xx"." ③ He pressed her against the wall, pulled off his tie, tucked the hair on her face behind her ears, lifted her chin, slowly approached, and said to her in a magnetic and charming voice, "Update soon."

The three-dimensional view is okay, but the flaws are also obvious. For example, the way I treat Lin Daiyu is Huo Huo. When Lin Daiyu grows up, she is the second Liang Lu in "In the Name of the People", you know. This fate is not good. The editor is very indulgent towards the slaves around him. It only takes two or three generations to create a nest of rats. This is just a time-travel to the past, but it is not easy. After all, the editor is only at this level and has a little fantasy. I don't know the rules and practices that are really passed down by the big family. It's already good to be able to write it like this. There are no other major problems for the time being.

I have read Chapter 49 so far. I feel that the plot is good and the words are OK. There are relatively few readers of Red Mansion books. I hope the author can stick to it. I personally hate Baoyu. He eats, drinks and has fun all day long and fights with women. I hope Daiyu will not marry him. After reading so far, I will give all my recommendation votes to the author.

A time traveler who is just 14 years old is already accepting all kinds of girls, and most of them are 10 years old or more. They are beasts.

Although there are still a lot of outrageous love stories and teasing stories, they are much more serious and reasonable than other Red Mansions fan stories that I have read. I urge you to update more.

I really like the Red Mansion theme! The original work is too sad, and life is hard to live up to, so it only adds to the sadness! The author's version is refreshing, the writing is delicate and emotional, and it depicts another Baoyu (ie Lin Yun). The character is inspiring and full of positive energy, making people unable to put it down once they see it. It is a masterpiece! Salute to the knife and pen master! 🌹

It will be written as a stallion novel later on, with an old miracle doctor who is a pimp, and the protagonist of a scumbag quote hahaha

It has the charm of the language of Dream of Red Mansions, and the characterization is logical and distinctive. The plot is very interesting, looks like Wang Zuo? Lin Daiyu is no longer sentimental, but her character is vividly portrayed. Baoyu's portrayal is also very reasonable. He is a waste rather than a fighter. The original work highlights a feudal rebel? How should I put it, I am a modern person who doesn't have a good impression of Baoyu. If you don't want Wang Zuo, the protagonist of Wang Zuo will be second only to Li Hongzhang and cannot break through the feudal system. Let's talk about my personal thoughts, start a new school and control the military power, use the whip method to spread the law, the industrial revolution... A little confusing, but I still recommend this book

I was successfully persuaded to quit after reading the fourth chapter. The protagonist is a person with no prioritization and the Dragon King routine. It's very annoying. The Dragon King must at least be extremely powerful, and the protagonist is a weak scholar with no system, and he's even pretending to be so. The protagonist put the life-saving box on the ground and went to do other things, and the supporting character ran over to check. Talent plot. I would like to ask the author whether he put his phone on the counter after taking out his phone to pay the bill, and then suddenly saw something he needed, and went to check it without taking his phone back? Talent!

This protagonist is a great saint. He has a hand in everything, and he likes to get involved in things that are not good for him. Anyone can scold the protagonist, but the protagonist still has to humble himself and agree.