A Commoner's Path to Immortality

From the perspective of character creation, the author probably doesn't have many friends, at least not many real friends who are affectionate and kind. The characters are too stereotyped and flat, and their emotional intelligence is generally low. None of them are likable, especially the senior sister. The author may have misunderstood "bold and heroic" as being arrogant, stupid and pretentious. . . The plot of the story is okay, but it's really just suitable to pass the time during a book shortage.

The cover is a bit off, but the content is pretty good.

The most important thing about a novel about cultivating immortals is that the setting of the cultivation system cannot be confusing. In this book, the correspondence between the realms of the underworld, demons, witches, and humans is extremely confusing. For example, the body shaping stage in the underworld is initially said to be equivalent to the transformation of gods in the human world, but later it corresponds to the Nascent Soul and the transformation to gods. Similarly, the levels of the demon world and the witch clan are also obscured and unclear. Another example is the protagonist's combat power. What's the use of practicing so many techniques from the demon world, the witch clan, the underworld, etc.? To deal with the provocation of the Xuanyin Sect in the Acropolis, he actually asked his Jin Dan to use crossbows to deal with four or five Nascent Souls, while his own Nascent Soul realm was preparing to deal with the enemy's Jin Dan.

The early stage is very good! But the later stage was a mess! I have such a bad temper! I just can't stand it anymore! Farewell

The front is okay, the back is a mess

I don't dare to say that the writing is not good, but the writing style is not to my taste. Is the eleven-year-old love story a bit too much? There are also fighting scenes where either talismans or magic weapons are used. It seems that without these two things, there would be no fighting. There is no feeling of punching to the flesh, and it does not show one's own fighting power. The talisman, weapon, and pill array are all external forces, and the cultivator is strong only when he is strong. It's better to look for novels about cultivating immortals with fists that can break the stars and swords that can open up the world. I will withdraw this one first. Yes, the highlight of this novel is the strong sense of family affection.

Good

In the first grade of elementary school, I was engaged in hard science and technology work and researched black technology. I had too much brains!

I skipped reading the first hundred chapters, or even just read the table of contents. It's good to read, but the story plot is too cliché. The reason why this book scores high is probably because it's not that poisonous and the logic is okay. Although the novels I have read are not comprehensive, this novel is average in my mind.

The writing is good, but there are too few updates and too many chapters.