Chaos Initial Stage

Good reviews encourage... Come on

It looks pretty good so far, but the author should not put double quotes in every sentence. Just add double quotes when speaking. For example: Ye Hun said: "..." This is right. Instead, add double quotes for the narration and also add quotes for the speech. Sometimes he doesn't even speak. It would be great if the author made Ye Hun half as good as Fang Yuan🤔

The story is compact and short of nonsense. A young man who does great things does not live in the love of his children. He relies on his own efforts and the indispensable authoritative assistance. However, the improvement of his strength in the end is a bit sloppy. He should have written a few hundred more chapters and added more friends to accompany him for a few more years.

It's okay at this stage

It sounds good, I hope it has a single female protagonist

The writing is okay, especially starting from the beginning, Chapter 12, I want to ask the author, there are still cultivation resources in the pig's feet, but they are not used. The cultivation resources are not enough to be used later. There is nothing wrong with saying these things after you have used up the cultivation resources. If your strength is not good, is there any use in having cultivation resources? If you show yourself to be a pig's feet, you won't die, right?

Nice

Hydrology

Not bad. Although some of the plots in Chapter 500 are a bit long-winded, overall it's good and worth reading. Give it a thumbs up and give me tickets.

After reading Chapter 66, none of the villains written have an IQ. The protagonist defeats others of his own level with one move, and even looks down on the protagonist.