Qingzhou Dasanxiu

Delicate and extremely meticulous, you can feel that the author is very careful,... Come on⛽️...

"If something is not kept secret, you will lose your identity." But in this novel, the protagonist does not have any secrets. He can give away any magic weapon and teach others any magical secrets! Everything I do can be clearly explained to others. I have told more than one person about my major exercises and secrets. The key is that I can teach anyone who wants to practice them! The protagonist has no secrets! Really disgusting! Did Han Lao Mo tell anyone about the vial in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? Have you told anyone about the spells you learned? Have you ever told anyone about his magic weapon? You, the main character, can't survive more than two chapters in the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. It's really getting worse the more you read!

The protagonist Gongsun Yan has a very slow pace in the early stages, which is very suitable for those who like mortals to cultivate immortality. The author's writing style is delicate, but there are too many chapters describing life, and it is a bit unreasonable that everyone can cultivate immortality after practicing the protagonist's skills, but overall it is worth reading. .

The layout is large and the text is concise. There are currently no logical loopholes and no cheats. Carefully design opportunities.

It's too boring, what about cultivating immortality? I was labeled as a classical immortal, but ended up fighting with mortals all the time. After fighting for hundreds of chapters, there was no result, which directly lowered the level of the immortal. Moreover, the author has bad conduct and invites trolls to criticize those who do not give high marks, haha. If you disagree, I say everything you said is correct.

I listened to more than 160 chapters in one go! The rich life of the protagonist makes people envious!

It started off okay, but it just insisted on getting into the academy flow, and the whole routine of pretending to be cool in school made no sense. It was disgusting. Bad review.

The new book is on the shelves. I read 20 chapters in one go. I feel the writing is good and the story is eloquent. I will continue to pay attention.

It was okay at the beginning, but after reading more than 200 chapters, I couldn't read it anymore. It didn't feel like a novel about cultivating immortals, which is full of grinding, looking forward and backward, constantly making mistakes, and just rambling. Upgrading and exercises can be done casually, but most of the time it is about human nature. Is this cultivating immortality? Is this starting a business?

The writing is skillful, but the writing is lacking in talent... It's a lot of repetitive and useless descriptions. To say it's good, it's detailed, calm and slow-moving (but there's not much that stands out), but to say it's bad, it's just a word count... When I first saw the author's speech, I thought it was quite sincere, until I saw him personally criticizing the bad reviews, it really stinks... He kept saying that he was just writing for the people he likes, so why not confess that he has a heart that can't accept the negation of others?