City Villain: The Heroines' Personas Crumble After They Read My Diary

Su Ming comes to the world of the crazy son-in-law of a dragon, and plays the role of a rich second generation who pursues the heroine Qin Yanran. He keeps a diary every day to promote the development of the story through the plot. Then the heroines can see the diary. Qin Yanran and Qin Yudai's characters collapsed under the influence of the diary. They don't want Su Ming to promote the development of the story. Su Ming scolds Qin Yudai in the diary. Qin Yudai is now in the diary. He was actually asked to work overtime. Yan Yueling went to Qin Yudai's company instead of Chu Yuan's company. The protagonist Chu Yuan was miserable. Ye Wanshuang, the first on the Yanguo God of War list and the leader of the four war gods, stopped listening to Chu Yuan and teased Chu Yuan casually. Su Ming did not expect that the relationship between the Su family and the Ye family was not good, but Ye Yusheng was pestering him this time, which was abnormal! His wife Jiang Xilian is even more abnormal. He bullies her every day. Shouldn't she hate him? And why does she work at Ye Yusheng Company? However, the Lin family was influenced by the protagonist's halo, and the whole family licked Chu Yuan. Wang Muyao, the killer, also went to work for Su Ming. Xiao Shiyun, the person who was originally engaged to the protagonist, did not make an appointment and came directly to Su Ming. Long Ming'er didn't like the protagonist either, so she escaped from Ao Palace and found Su Ming. After that, she started selling marrow-cleansing wine and bone-rejuvenating pills... In the end, the plot became increasingly difficult to correct, and the heroine's character completely collapsed!

It sucks. It's not even in the middle. 7.5 Points

That's it again, this kind of writing has loopholes 1. Know that you are a character in a novel, who may break down or commit a crime, or act as you like. (Imagine that I am sure that I am a virtual character and I directly burn, kill and loot GTA) 2. If you know that you are the main villain, just kill him if the system kills him. He is a direct eunuch. Anyone with a brain knows that he cannot kill him. (Forced by the author not to think about it) 3 If you follow the plot, others will know it. Others can go against the plot, but you cannot. No brains? You know the plot is off, but you haven't noticed anything wrong yet? (Again, the author forced me not to think about it) If you complain that others are brainless, why don't you yourself?

There's nothing sinister about Xiaobai's novel, I'm just a little curious about when the protagonist will change his attitude and be able to accept girls in this world.

It's hard to imagine how to read 60% of the story carefully. Some of the heroines started to like Su Ming for no reason. And after the plot was halfway through, some of the heroines began to think that everyone has a diary. The time-travelers still don't know that the heroine has a diary. Moreover, the system gave an invincible body, so how could he die in the ending? Overall, it was a forced intellectual reduction. I didn't know what I was expecting. Before I commented, I wanted to skip to the final chapter to read it, but now I don't think about it anymore.

Very funny

It's so funny, it makes my stomach hurt from laughing

It was well written, but the ending was a bit rushed. But that's okay.

It's too intellectual. It's OK to be intellectual, but you can't leave any brains behind. They're all people who follow the plot. Can't the unreasonable things be forcibly removed? Everyone in China knows that one wrong step will lead to a wrong step. Doesn't the villain and protagonist just don't understand? If he doesn't understand, then the identity of the time traveler will directly collapse.

Very good