Super Tycoon Technology System

I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters. The punctuation marks were all over the place, and the preface and the follower didn't match up. The math is even below the elementary school level. It's plagiarized like a running account. The main character's name is too lazy to be changed and just separated by punctuation marks. It's really bad.

It sounds okay, okay! Systematic and nice to listen to

It's really unaccustomed to intersperse time-travel stories with system stories. Even if you write about him building a spaceship and going to an alien planet, it's better than traveling to ancient times. At least it doesn't feel inconsistent. I jumped off the building halfway through watching it.

It's just a piece of stitching from many novels. The front and back don't have the same head and pony tail. I'm too lazy to change many places. It's just like a primary school student.

The writing is so poor, there are so many typos, the author didn't graduate from elementary school.

It's written in such a mess that I can't understand it.

For the first time, I feel that the author's writing style is not good...

The fighter in the yy article is extremely vulgar... Yue

The plot is not well connected and there are many typos

Water character, typo, illiteracy 🙄 random string