The Fierce Concubine Is on Top: the Evil Evil King Loves You Gently

The writing is still smooth, and the plot arrangement is not bad, but the setting is incomplete. Let me comment on a few uncomfortable points: 1. The description of the heroine jumps around repeatedly. She becomes attractive when she needs to attract men, and becomes sallow and thin when she needs to attract readers' emotions. ༾(◉◞હ̱◟◉)༿ 2. The background of the heroine's family has also changed repeatedly. It needs to be reflected that the heroine's family is powerful, including military commanders and important ministers. It's so disgusting to highlight the need to highlight the opposition, and no one dares to stretch out their hands and curse at the heroine. (´ﾟωﾟ)? 3. The design of the vicious female supporting role is also very uncomfortable. Can an orphan girl without any help and still a slave be able to attract the attention of the two princes? 4. Because things before rebirth are not explained carefully, many plots will be suddenly inserted and then pushed to before rebirth~