Celestial Official of the Corpse-Subduing Sect

Too many explanations are repeated explanations

If you like supernatural things, you can check it out

The plot is wonderful and smooth, the characters are three-dimensional and multi-faceted, the emotions are sincere, the story line is clear, clear and organized, I just hate that my vocabulary is too low😁🥰🤩

The protagonist is very good at deflecting blame. You are worthy of being the protagonist. You are the only one who can co-write this story.

Many details were not explained clearly, and the fight was not exciting. There was a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and it ended hastily. None of the early foreshadowing was filled in. The white-clothed immortal in the underworld gave the male protagonist 80 years of life, and his grandfather gave him immortality by eating dried wood fruits. The conflict

The ending is too hasty

Come on

I'm too lazy to write it, it's such a hasty ending.

There are still a lot of holes to fill, and the ending is too brutal. Can there be a second part?

Bad writing. As expected, there are very few good supernatural writings. They are either harems or scum, and this one is even more brainless. Not to mention the protagonist👎🏻, the supporting characters are still stupid. How come all the characters have low intelligence?