The Beloved Five-and-a-Half-Year-Old: I Have Four Powerful Big Brothers

I personally like this book very much, it suits my taste ❤

1. Yaoyao is always bullied. There are a lot of typos. The author submitted the result to the author and the author did not change it at all. 2. Moreover, the characters are very confusing. I don't know where the cat I raised at the beginning went. 3. The male protagonist Shen Ling was written as the female Shen Ling, and the female protagonist Shen Yaoyao was written as the male Shen Yaoyao. 4. The heroine was originally an adopted daughter but her parents appeared inexplicably 5. The author's writing is good in the early stage, but very poor in the later stage. The later stage is all based on reading so many chapters and not wanting to give up before continuing. In the later stage, the heroine becomes very arrogant, proud, and looks down on others. It seems that she is different from others. If others make her unhappy, she will be hidden away. 6. Moreover, the second brother's original official partner didn't even know where he went. He randomly found a school beauty as his girlfriend, and said that he was the second brother's original crush. (Personal feeling, don't spray)

Yaobao is a little crybaby but quite ordinary! Shen Ling is very good at guarding the medicinal treasure! Yaobao doesn't have a golden finger, but his other talents are pretty good! Yaobao was bullied too much every day, but the Shen family didn't notice. Only Shen Ling noticed that Yaobao was injured! Also, it's a pity that I didn't see New Dad and I don't watch it now. Not attractive to me! *:..｡Bye *:..｡Bye *:..｡Bye *:..｡Bye *:..｡Bye

The plot is exciting, I personally still enjoy watching it😊

Advantages: The character description is pretty good. The protagonist Yao Yao is cute and polite. Because he was abused in his original home, he has a bit of low self-esteem. He gradually becomes cheerful later on. Shen Ling is a big man and will always pay attention to Yao Yao's condition and protect Yao Yao. I think this is very good Disadvantages: There are many typos in the article, and the names of characters are often misspelled. If you skip reading, you won't even know who the character is. I hope the author can review it and avoid so many typos in the future. Second, since Yaoyao is the heroine, she is constantly being hurt in the article. I know that people can only grow through hardship, but Yaoyao is hurt and kidnapped in almost all the chapters I read. Author, you've had enough. Please be nice to Yaoyao. I'm here to see the group pet story, not to see the heroine's baby being bullied every day. (Babys, if what I said is wrong, please tell me and I will definitely change it)