Holy of Heaven and Earth

It is not easy to write a book, but the protagonist is not decisive enough. The first plot in Wuqi Continent is pretty good, but the subsequent plot after becoming an Alchemy Saint is a bit hard to understand, although I was jumping to read it 😂

After Chapter 90, the protagonist becomes stupid as soon as he enters the big city. It's so annoying.

It doesn't look good. I don't like to see this kind of homeless protagonist. He has a family, brothers and father, but he doesn't go back to see him. He doesn't even send some martial arts pills back to the family for use. He is a homeless man who is always out picking up garbage.

1/3 Is okay, but the rest is not good at all. The protagonist is indecisive and likes to be a bad guy. This is a world where people kill for status, and the protagonist needs to be reasonable.

It's written in the imitation of Fighting to Break the Sky, which doesn't make any sense.

Why does the protagonist faint so often? Why doesn't he just disappear? It's so confusing.

The plot is a bit bland, like a running account

How precious and rare the alchemist is, he is very flattering and emphasizes that only once dozens of times is someone secretly protecting him.