Xuan Huan: Let You Be the Clan Leader and You Will Mass-Produce the Emperor?

Hello, stranger from another scene on your phone. Whether you are reading the news during the day or at night, you should pay attention to your health and drink water frequently. Mobile phones radiate a lot of radiation, so don't look at it too much. When you have time, call your family more often and chat about home affairs. Remember to eat on time and take good care of your body. ----Concern from strangers! ? ? ?

The story is quite good, but it's a bit long-winded, there's too much saliva, and the names are mixed up, but I can barely read it, but I can't read it after chapter 110. It's a mess. It feels like it was written by two people, and it's not connected. It's originally about the rise of the family. System, even the system can be written down later, and the deviations vary from one star to the smallest. Could it be that the author who wrote the following article has eaten up the system, and a good story has been messed up like this. No wonder the score is so low. This is the reason. I gave up and read other books!

After 100 pictures, what the hell are you writing?

Too many typos. I can't stand it anymore.

Too messy

The cow head written is wrong, and the pony tail doesn't look good at all.

They are all typos. Can you be more careful? I always get the names wrong, and I have to guess by myself even if I don't read the novel.

It looked good before Chapter 130, but ugly after Chapter 130

The first few dozen chapters are okay, but the rest feel like they were moved from somewhere else. Chaos

It's not a typo, but what did you write after these more than 100 chapters?