King of Stone Gambling

It's very imaginative, and the writing is okay. The plot is a bit confusing, and it's hard to tell. The characters are also used randomly. Zhang San is written as Ji Si, so readers can't tell the difference.

The plot jumps too fast, the paragraphs are not connected, the sentences are not smooth, and there are too many typos, typos, and white words, resulting in unclear words, confusing expressions, and inconsistencies. Please proofread carefully.

The more I look at it, the more it looks like a three-year-old child's play. It's confusing and very comfortable.

I really can't stand it anymore

Too messy! Beginning and no tail.