Immortality: Starting from Being Forced by the Witch

Overall, looking at it now, this book is pretty good except for the Qiu Yu section, which is a bit disgusting. It feels like the author is a newbie and didn't realize how destructive the disgusting points are to the entire book. As for feeling better, you know everything. I won't go into details here for fear of being blocked. Finally, if anyone wants to fall into the trap and comes across this comment of mine, just skip to the part about Qiu Yu in Canglong Fairy City... Otherwise, you will lose your appetite and be unable to eat hard dishes later.

There are some exciting points, but also some poisonous points. The author has some problems with the organization of the story in this book, and many details and plots are not handled well, but the description of other aspects is still quite good, and the feeling is sufficient. All in all, the flaws do not hide the advantages, it is quite interesting.

Sign a slave contract at the beginning, then there is inflation, 3 attributes at a time, 13 points at the beginning and three levels of Qi training. Then the qualifications are increased to 1,000 and it is still the most rubbish qualification. Or is it three levels of Qi training? There is a difference of 10,000 points from the most rubbish to the penultimate rubbish? If you want to write about the waste stream, then don't cheat. Are you cheating just to be treated like a dog? There are still 13 qualifications that can be cultivated. I'm afraid you won't be able to ascend to 10,000 qualifications. And 10,000 qualifications is only the penultimate qualification for you. Can you understand the basic data before writing a book?

1. Eunuch; 2. It's a bit interesting at the beginning, but it's just constant assessment and assessment later. 3. Forget about the plot of Eunuch, the characters just disappear.

Although the previous writing was very good, this ending is unacceptable.

It's really annoying😡

Why do you say the plot is messy and it's a eunuch?

Very pretty

Not bad, but too slow

The plot is average, the author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, all the women with pig's feet are from the J courtyard, and there are eunuchs at the end. I personally suggest that unless you really run out of books to read, I don't recommend entering this trap! !