Honghuang: Taking Sect Master Tongtian as My Disciple from the Start

The plot is okay. It's the author. Don't you know you and me?

If you don't know how to use classical Chinese, don't use it. The plot is quite good.

A lot of plots and cultivation realms are messed up. It makes me want to vomit. It's rubbish.

Oh my, my, my, it's so awkward

Really mysterious

The writing is really bad

Is it okay to be an unsightly and bad author?

After reading the beginning, it is obvious that the writing is not good, and the rest of it is in vernacular and nondescript.

Generally speaking, I am very satisfied. The layout is not ordinary. People who travel through time travel worship the Tongtian Cult Master as their master. When you go up, they will capture the Tongtian Cult Master and worship you as their master. 😂 It's funny when you think about it. Moreover, it's an Earth Immortal's cultivation level that makes a Daluo Jinxian worship you as a disciple. But the plot is a bit too confusing. I skipped half of it and I can't understand what I heard. And it's annoying that you can't call me you or me. I thought it was okay at first, but it didn't make sense throughout the whole story. The most annoying thing is that if you use classical Chinese or words, you can use it. No one will stop you. But why do you explain it below after using it? Do you think others can't understand it? Since you think others can't understand, why do you use it to show that you are capable? Or do you think others can understand it? Since you think others can understand it, why do you need to explain? And the ending is a bit confusing. I heard the climax and then ended with a confused face. Although it is not a trap, the ending is a bit inexplicable. Overall, I quite like it.

It's just a little short