Honghuang: I Can Change Time

"Does the Yuanshi Saint want to continue taking action? Okay, then I, Zhao Gongming, will be waiting here." Just this sentence means that the author is definitely less than 10 years old in real life! Under the age of ten, you can only write about equipment and face it!

There are many typos. Journey to the West was good until the end of Calamity Tribulation. Shava is decisive and very good. In the later period, there were all the gods in the West. I saw more than 300 of them. I discarded them, but you can still look at them. When you see that you can't stand it, just look at the end of the catalog.

A little comment. I abandoned the book in more than 430 chapters. When the fragments of the ancient world were not integrated at the beginning, the writing was quite good. At least it is in line with my personal taste, so I can give it a good look at the beginning. Five stars, nine points, it is decisive in killing. It cannot be said to be invincible and domineering. There is a small problem. The protagonist's realm improves too slowly, and there is a deliberate drag on the rhythm. Suspect, but later on, I forgot how many chapters started, and started writing the fusion fragments. The more I wrote, the more confusing and watery it became. It was like a running account, and I had no desire to read on. So, I personally feel that giving it a seven is not too high, so I will give it an average after all. In addition, there are so many typos in this book.

Can only say rubbish

It's so well written, don't write it again

Are you really smarter? There are at least 10 typos in one chapter

What the hell is after Chapter 400? When did other cultivation systems come out? According to the geographical location of the four prehistoric states, there was no such territory at all. Where did angels and demons come from? How come it feels like it was pieced together to fit in with those Western myths? There was nothing wrong with the protagonist's style of doing things in the previous writing, but later on he became more and more like an ordinary cultivator. I can't stand it anymore 😑😑😑

It's too mysterious, and it's hard to read by Wen Zou Zou.

The character design and background are all very well written, but there are a lot of typos.

The understanding of the realm of cultivation is a mess. Taiyi and Daluo are at the same level. It's okay not to understand this. After all, many people think that Daluo is behind Taiyi, but Jinxian is not just a Jinxian. Taiyi, Daluo, and Hunyuan are all Jinxian. Just because the Twelve Golden Immortals are taught, you can't think that they are all new to Jinxian and downgrade a bunch of Daluo. And the plot also deliberately suppresses the pig's feet. The novel is not a novel, and the enjoyable article is not an enjoyable article. The routine of forcibly reducing the wit and slowing down the pace and word count cannot be avoided later.