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Chapter 150 starts with a few sentences explaining a few chapters, it's a trap.

It's relatively average. It feels like an old novel from the 2000s. There are too many characters with facial expressions. It's hard to read without being engrossed. The boss lady, parents at the beginning, and the junior schoolmates at the back are all very superficial, and the descriptions are very lacking in depth. To give a simple example, in the 60th chapter, I met the welcoming senior sister at the train station. Without any foreshadowing, he started acting like a lunatic at the train station. If we follow the current model of novels, there should not be too flat characters. At least it will first describe how the senior sister was poked in the heart. Whether she thinks the protagonist is handsome or has other aspects such as white skin. Then he wrote that she was stunned, and when she regained consciousness, the protagonist had already followed the senior and walked away. Then add an inner description, such as feeling regretful, first angry at yourself for being a nymphomaniac and not seizing the opportunity. Then he started getting sick. Instead of feeling that the male protagonist is about to start getting sick without waiting for her or looking at her. This obviously destroys the reader's sense of substitution and is illogical. And I feel that after not seizing the opportunity, the reaction should be to see the new junior students, and discuss asking the junior students to help find out the news about the male protagonist. The attitude will not be so inexplicable and sick, but at least on the surface, it will be more enthusiastic. After all, there is something to ask for. I can only say that what I see is full of the sense of the times, and they are all outdated things. Maybe some people liked the first few books when they were written. Later, after reading more novels and probably knowing the good and bad, it seemed to ruin the reading experience.