Immortality: Starting from the Taoist Couple

The speed is a bit fast. If you like to take the green train, you can come and see it😂

So far, it looks good. The protagonist is quite humorous, and he doesn't just look at women... At least there is a process of cultivating feelings.

The plot is quite innovative, and basically every heroine has a small role, so overall I personally feel that the score can reach 8.6 To 8.8, Around 8.9. But I personally feel that it is difficult to write a book like this in the later stage. At present, his quality seems to be pretty good, but there are more and more supporting female characters behind him. If he does not describe so many, he will not be able to improve his strength. When there are more supporting actresses, the protagonist will become more and more cold-blooded. He will only upgrade for the sake of getting a wife, he will only trick the supporting actresses, and slowly he will become an emperor. He will marry one of the 3,000 beauties in the harem in one place. The ship will be sunk in the south of the Yangtze River. Officials from all over the country will pay tribute to beautiful women. Slowly, it will become just for upgrades. ——Maybe this is the so-called risk of innovation, because the way he writes is a bit similar to the Three Kingdoms, the author of the history of the Three Kingdoms. As long as it is a beautiful woman, he will not reject anyone. In the later period, he basically never refused anyone else, whether it was a soldier or a general. He was a little hungry and did not choose what to eat. Slowly turned into a machine This is what the author needs to consider. If it is here, I will give it an A grade, it is good-looking. At present, its plot and characters are more than 170 chapters worthy of my rating. But I still look forward to how the author solves these problems, because this problem is indeed difficult.

It's good to watch, but I always feel that the pace is a bit slow and the plot is a bit bland. I was a little upset and annoyed while watching it. I only have a soft spot for certain plots, hehehe😁😁😁

If nothing else, let's just say that in a world where force is respected, if a family member doesn't take the patriarch seriously and doesn't talk about it, and still doesn't deal with the patriarch at all times, shouldn't such a person be slapped to death long ago? With your way of thinking, you still say that strength is the most important thing and you should give up the trap.

Come on come on come on come on

It's chapter 190 of the Xuanpin talent: I just built the foundation, what a mess, and long-winded

I have basically finished reading the updated chapters. Let me comment. To be honest, I have almost 20 years of experience as a bookworm. This novel can only be said to be very average. It is suitable for newbies. Old bookworms may not be able to read it. The plot direction is quite nonsense. Let's take the war between two families at the beginning. The fuse of a mine can trigger a fight between two families with similar strength. This is really nonsense, according to the law of the jungle. It is true that the big fish eats the small fish, but there is no absolute certainty. Who would do this? It is not the hatred of the subjugation of the country or the hatred of the genocide. The consequences of doing so will only hurt both sides. The family members will be sharply reduced, the property will be damaged, and a life-and-death hatred will be formed, and then it will evolve into a life-and-death feud. In the end, even if one party wins, it will be the old, weak, sick and disabled, and then be annexed by others. With so many disadvantages, which family would be so stupid? This alone can dissuade others, let alone other places. Maybe it doesn't matter to newbies, but old bookworms really can't stand it. Of course, there are some highlights, so I won't list them all.

If you give me a poem, let it be broadcast as soon as possible and then we can make it up for dinner.

The imagination is okay, the plot is good, it would be better with a little more description.