Spiritual Qi Revival: From the Start, I Got the Kael Template

After reading it for so long, I'm going to give a critical review. It's good to watch. The main character has a brain but not a virgin. But there are too many descriptions of the supporting characters. Sometimes, half of a chapter is made up of supporting characters. When reading this kind of article, it's all about the male protagonist's pretensions. It seems very uncomfortable to watch them all at once.

It's okay, but my writing skills need to be improved😁

Well enough

The further back you go, the worse it looks.

The ultimate third-person writing style looks particularly awkward, and there are a lot of action monologues (either fighting descriptions or third-person narrative monologues). It's less like a novel and more like a biography of the protagonist. Not very recommended

People always live toward death

It's very good, but it's a pity that there is no mall to buy equipment. Otherwise, with the equipment, you can theoretically be invincible.