A Bug on the Road to Immortality

It's pretty good-looking at the front, with a lot of laughs and grooves. Maybe my laugh point is low, because I just kept hahahahahahahahahahahahaha. The female protagonist is quite likable, and she has always worked hard on her own. The male protagonist has little sense of presence, and only appears to sprinkle sugar. I personally like this kind of setting. After all, this is a female protagonist, and I don't like the male protagonist to be too pushy and steal the spotlight. The fairy tales are also mixed with quick time traveling, hahaha, this is quite unexpected, and the hodgepodge of various quick time traveling girls, time traveling girls, reborn girls, and system girls is also a bit interesting. The heroine has always maintained her original intentions and her character is relatively stable and has not collapsed much. The whole story felt good, but the ending was too rushed! Many things have not been explained clearly! ! ! What will happen to Bai Xueyao and her harem? Where is Yun Chu? He didn't take good care of his only apprentice and broke the promise he made with Qize! ! I vowed to call him master at the beginning, but then I turned around and forgot about it. I made amends in the middle, and then gave up again in the later stage... I originally wanted to see how the heroine leads the apprentice... Ugh~~ the ending was too hasty.

I would like to apologize to the author first, because I am personally used to reading negative reviews first, so please bear with me. In general, I can feel that the author is very serious in writing, there are basically no typos, and there is a big framework, but it may lack some writing skills (of course I don't understand it, just because I have been reading the book for a long time, so I can give some suggestions from the perspective of a reader) The first is the background preparation. When introducing characters from the scene, you can explain the character's sphere of influence and camp affiliation. For example, Hu's fourth uncle can clearly explain their identity in the city at once when they appear on the scene, and then explore the town map. For example, for the kidnapped team, we can explain the rank and identity of their parents and masters earlier, and at the same time, what hardships they suffered on the way home, and what psychological changes they had as a result, pave the way, so that there is both objective resource support and subjective mentality changes. Later, when everyone grows up, it will be more reasonable to become stronger. Next is the characterization. After reading dozens of chapters, in addition to various things that show the little fox's lack of care, there are no events, psychological descriptions or dialogues, which reflect the personalities of the supporting characters. The emotions between the characters also lack details... I have no impression at all when I recall it. I almost forgot the name. There are also some things such as the value of items, the currency system, and the level of cultivating immortals. There is no cross comparison, which makes me a bit confused. Then there is the connection of chapters and plots. This book gives me the feeling that the author has already thought about it. The protagonist wants to obtain a certain prop this time. He arranges an event or a pet in a propositional composition style, and suddenly obtains it through coincidence or accident. There is no preliminary preparation, no atmosphere, and very few ups and downs. The same goes for other time-travelers. The plot has already developed before their origins are clearly explained? The main reason for the above is that the writing style doesn't quite catch my eye, but the writing by a new writer is quite good. Keep up the good work, author!

Beautiful! The plot is exciting and the author's writing is also good. The first few chapters describe the daily life of the heroine when she was a child and was raised by her uncles and aunts, which is relatively dull. But the elders went back due to force majeure and left her alone to practice. The plot became more and more interesting~ Except that the ending is too rushed... There's nothing wrong with it... I have a lot of things to ask... Doesn't the heroine have phoenix blood? Why didn't the blood concentration increase? What happened to uncles and aunts after they returned to Qingqiu? Can't the heroine go to Qingqiu to see it? Sigh... Can the author go home and write a side story or something... (T_T)

It felt pretty good, the process was exciting, but the ending was a little rushed, and some things were not explained clearly, such as the fox at the beginning. The heroine's character is very real, protective and transparent.

The only disadvantage is that the ending is too big, the overall framework is very grand, the author's writing style is unparalleled, and his view of right and wrong is also very correct! A very comfortable one-knit braid that can be worn quickly through the body! It's refreshing, the heroine's mentality is as comfortable as ever, yes, it's comfortable. Without my destiny, I am not as good as God. I am pretentious and aloof. From beginning to end, I go with the flow and stick to my heart and principles. I am able to adapt at any time and will not be stubborn. A very good article. The TV series should also be very good. I feel that it can be compared with the Harry Potter series in terms of beauty. In my opinion, it can be said that it is even better.

The bad review is because it sucks! ! ! It's well written, but I won't continue writing. It started to change after I came out of the Cloud Secret Realm. . . . One thing after another, and then in the end it was over without understanding anything! I (~!"!,~)/#/, Www.,!") Represents swear words. . . .

Very nice

The heroine is too stupid and her IQ is not very high. If it weren't for the heroine, she would have died many times. Raising a spiritual beast can make it climb to the top of your head. When you are new to the sect, you can let someone you have only known for less than a day practice in your cave. But practicing in a pool by yourself is really out of the ordinary. After reading so many articles about cultivating immortals, even the heroine of Notre Dame can't do this. I abandoned the article in the middle.

Sanguanzhengyou's relaxing and joyful article on how to achieve immortality through pregnancy. In fact, I don't really like the messy feel of quick travel, but the plot of this book is that the quick travel is combined with various worlds to achieve cause and effect in the cultivation of immortality. The settings are relatively reasonable, so I accepted it well. One book combines multiple settings such as a transmigration heroine, a reborn girl, a time-traveling girl, a system girl, a blackened girl, etc. The heroine's growth is stuck with bugs, which is quite interesting. Of course, despite the good fortune of Shuangwen's leading heroine, the heroine herself is very hard-working, and her kindness is not as good as that of a holy mother, and her personality is still very likable. It's a pity that I don't know why the author rushed to the end, and a lot of settings and foreshadowing were not developed. Although the ending chapter summarizes the key points, there are still many regrets that are not fully understood. I hope that if there is an opportunity in the future, the author can pick up this book again and continue to add the second half.

The first part was quite interesting, but the world view was too big and the ending was too hasty. It felt like a lot of things were left unfinished.