Honor of Kings: I Dived Past Two Towers, and My Coach Told Me to Stop Throwing!

What can I say about this book? It's pretty good. The front part is indeed very beautiful. Anyway, I personally think it is very beautiful, but you wrote that the heroine's relationship was developing too fast at that time, and there was no experience of any help at all. She just took a walk and gave her a necklace, and then the relationship was established? It was too fast, and there was also the scene where the heroine had an accident. As a professional player, it is impossible for him not to know how important a mentality is to a professional player. The good guy produced a poet himself, and he had to tell him before the game. Isn't this purely undercover? Also, no matter how worried you are, you are not dead. If you use one skill to hit blue in a game and get out of the blue zone, I really admire you. It still has a certain viewing value, but it is not highly recommended. It's okay just for watching the game, but from an emotional point of view, I personally think it's too lame.

I'm really looking forward to him filling in the hole at the end with 2

The communication within the game is a bit exaggerated; the game commentary is not neutral, and it is true that praise is given when it is due, but sometimes one praises the other team, but the other will say "Let's see and talk about it" or something like that. But this book is still good (from the perspective of an AG fan, it is really good-looking, not only because the protagonist led AG to win the championship, but most importantly, "he" helped the Nuo team share a little pressure. I really hope that the Nuo team can play for a few more years and win more championships, but the Nuo team has also played for a long time, so take a rest when you need to)

The description was pretty good at first, but in fact, every scene is pretty much the same, and the number of words seems to be too high. The plot covers a total of two championships, which is pretty good and not too bloated. The ending is too fast. Write another chapter to explain it. If you want to write a bad ending, you should at least explain the ending of Mu Mu and her parents. Also explain where the protagonist has gone. Fill in some pitfalls of the previous characters. Finally, I hope that the protagonist will leave some more traces in this world, such as being remembered in AG.

What kind of ending is it? It's really so bad that my grandma's family couldn't write it. Can it be cut off?

OK

After finishing this book quickly, my feeling is: the author's level is not high, and he doesn't understand a lot of common sense in it, such as being able to type with the opponent in the peak game. Also, the foreign teams are described as too strong, and other domestic teams are described as too weak. Are you telling me that Honor of Kings, a project that is more stable than table tennis, cannot beat foreigners? Of course, this is a novel, and the strength of the team depends entirely on the author's mood. The most important thing is: it's unfinished and unacceptable.

The content of the game is relatively rough, the pace is fast, and some of them are mindless. The author's strength is below that of a king, which is understandable.

Didn't you say that having a woman won't affect him? Can you write it?

It's pretty good. The only thing is that I don't really like the ending. I suggest writing a spin-off.