Virus Evolution Begins with Pokemon

It's finished. This book is an unlimited stream. The early and late stages are more interesting. The middle stage is a bit boring, but it's okay. It's readable. There's no heroine. If you're a book-hungry reader, you can read it. The ending is pretty good. I like it.

It still feels readable, except for the typos which make it look a bit strange. If the author can change it, just change it.

It looks good, but there are a lot of mistakes

Very nice