I'm Just an Outer Disciple

Bear the humiliation and bear the burden? ? ? ? Too low-key

After reading the whole book, I feel pretty good. Although the early plot is a bit bland, it becomes more interesting the further you read, just like old wine, and the story line is also very complete. Of course, there are some problems with the plot that don't make sense, but not many. Overall it's good and worth watching.

There are too many typos and you don't respect the readers or yourself.

So far it looks very well written and very true! Without being exaggerated, it would be better if the tragedy could be written in a more specific and detailed way.

There are almost crazy typos.

Not only are there so many typos, but there are also too many words or too few words, which is too hard to read. Bad review. Bad review. Bad review.

Not funny, the plot is too bland, a bit boring, not great

See how many hours it took

Quite like it

The protagonist is so rubbish, one lasts 10 days and the other 20 days, and he even took pills to level up during the Qi training period. The pig's feet are a bit useless.