The Mage with a Blade

The first few dozen chapters, to be honest, are not bad, but as you get to the back, things become more and more different. If you can't write one chapter of cultivation content in ten chapters, then what are you doing? Wouldn't it be better if I just read various articles about modern cities? Moreover, the feeling you give me sincerely is too uncomfortable. Starting from Chapter 120, what kind of political commissar compound and village and town cadres are being built? Do I need to see this from you? This is really not as good as a pure urban officialdom novel, and it has no cultivation content. The more I read it, the more I can't stand it. Alas, it's hard to write a negative review.

Not bad. Unique and unique🐯...

There are some texts between them, which are neither east nor west. . I don't know how someone said it's good. Have you never read any serious Western magic literature? Still haven't read any serious Eastern cultivating immortals or martial arts novels??

Nothing interesting, a waste of time. It is indeed a book written by an old fellow, not a country fellow.

The story concept is good, but it's too wordy.

The more you write, the more you go off topic. My child, what is the title of your book? Do you still know it?

This kind of novel cannot be a god. The biggest flaw is the plot. As others have said, no matter how good the opening effect is, if it becomes distorted as it is written, the novel can be said to be useless.