My Dreams Can Become Reality

The subject matter is really good, and it has a fresh feeling of opening a blind box. But the plot setting is terrible. At the beginning, the protagonist knows that if he joins the army using the fighting skills he learned in his dream, his future is guaranteed, but his sister needs the protagonist's care, so this road is not feasible. Later, the protagonist received the secret inheritance from a dream, and began to solicit classmates to make medicines and sell medicines non-stop. Then he taught his classmates how to practice the exercises. At the same time, the protagonist also told his classmates that without strong strength, he could not protect his rich assets. He himself said: Even if I can escape from the threat of other forces, what about my mother and sister? But what the protagonist does in reality is really putting himself on fire. [I made medicine in front of my classmates, and also used formations. This medicine is very effective. Once a middle-aged person uses it, his body will return to the state of his youth. Later, when I teach the techniques to my classmates, I just need them to promise not to teach them to others of their own lineage. Later, I started buying medicinal materials and tried other elixirs. The premise of all these things is that the protagonist is still an ordinary person and has no introduction to practicing skills. Just doing things every three days, I'm convinced

I feel that the plot is a bit stiff, how can anyone in the world of cultivation keep following him and not beat him up.

See #35. It's okay, but it's more routine and there are too many details. For example, several chapters have been changed, and most of the early stages are filled with dialogue and no fighting. The body in the dream is not synchronized with reality, only knowledge brings reality back. However, the reality does not seem to be simple, and it seems that the aura is not low.

It's a good new theme that shines before my eyes

The subject matter is novel, the narrative ability is strong, the main plot is very emotional, but the branch plot is too protracted, and there is more than enough good work, but not enough quality. It's delicious to eat, but it's a pity to throw it away.

Theme: The BOSS in the second cycle is similar to this thing, but the second cycle is Cthulhu and this one is Xiuxian. Plot: This thing is a mess. The first hundred chapters made me delete the book from my bookshelf twice. This is the first one. It's pretty awesome. I know it's difficult to straighten out the plot between the two worlds of dream and reality, but it's not like the previous chapter was a dream and the next chapter will become reality. I don't even know whether the focus of this book is dreams or reality. If it's a dream, it's better to write about time travel; if it's reality, then use less of the dream component, don't make both the same. When you take medicine in the real world of the plot, you can still leak the information. If you leak it, leak it, and you can actually give the readers a non-money option. I'm curious. You said in the previous article how powerful the medicine is, but the second article was robbed. If it's not a mole, can it be a game? Which organization's top management can give away good things from within to others? The reason why it is rated as good-looking: I can trick anyone. I don't believe that I am the only one who reads books without reading reviews.

The reality is too shocking.