The Short-Lived Supporting Actress Tears Up the Lucky Carp Script

Although the plot is very exciting, I found a problem, that is, the author always likes to write the names of people wrong, or write too few words, and in the last chapter, this is a very simple question, Lin Shu's children should call Lin Shu's mother grandma or grandma. The child did not say it wrong, but Lin Shu's mother herself said it wrong. She said, "Yi Mo, come to grandma." 'Shouldn't she be called grandma? Also, in the previous chapters, Lin Wei's biological brother is Lin Zheng, not Lin Zhan. Lin Zhan can only be said to be a cousin. I have commented on the paragraphs of each chapter of this book before, and I have also pointed them out, but I don't know if you have read it, the author. Okay, the book should not have typos, there can be a few typos, I can understand it, but you have too many, either there are too few words or there are typos. Your plot is still good, but there are too many typos. So I can only say that you are wonderful in detail, but your writing style is not very good, so I can only say that it is average! . You can say I don't want to read it, but I think you can change it. This is my summary! ! ! !

Coherent writing style