Crazy! It Was Just an Exile, Why Was the Palace Emptied by Her?

It's a bit anticlimactic. I think the previous part was okay. But after arriving in Xiliang, the part I wrote went a little off track. I felt like it was the end of the world. People who deserved death will not die, and the person who was supposed to be the emperor also gave up. I think the last chapter was written wrong?

I've read a lot of stories about people who travel through time, empty out the treasury, go into exile, and then counterattack and take revenge. But to be honest, this is the most uncomfortable book I have ever read. First, although it is a story about a female protagonist, other people on the exile road initially hated the male protagonist's family because they were implicated, and they submissively treated everyone just because of a meal. Is this possible? The shift is too big and there is no transition. The halo of the heroine is too serious. Second, the novel has less than 200 chapters in total, and the male protagonist plays half of the plot. During this period, Prince Xing comes to show his courtesy, and the male protagonist does not have as many scenes as Prince Xing. If this was put into a TV series, I would suspect that the second male lead and the third male lead would join the cast with their own money, and the male lead would become less transparent. Thirdly, the younger brother Zang Qi who has been accepted is an enemy. Please, I haven't reached the point of complete trust yet. Can you not write it so ambiguously? The heroine's official partner doesn't even know the heroine's secret. It was first known by a male lead. Does the heroine have any brains? Is she a double clean? Anyway, the further I got to the back, the less I could stand it, so I decided to abandon the article.

Good looking, good luck to the author

The ending is not good. Since the emperor is a tyrant, why not fight back? A clear and bright world? It's anticlimactic.

A brainless novel that asks people to open warehouses and put out grains to give porridge? Will corrupt officials let these people go? Corrupt officials just lost food? She just lets these people do good things. Isn't this harming people? Where is the help? Then corrupt officials will become more powerful people... This is such an irresponsible act of kindness.

For such a bad book, as long as the author can pass the high school, he will not be unable to write GP!

The novel is good-looking, the plot is exciting, and the writing is smooth and fluent, but the second half is a bit messy, rushed and unsatisfactory.

Nice

Overall it's okay, but the ending is not very good and too rushed. I should write more.

What does the finale mean? I don't understand. I'll give it a good review for the sake of the previous review being pretty good.