Naruto: Exchanging for Everything

How you want to write a fan novel is your business, but to be honest, the whole book is uncomfortable. I won't talk about the confusion of various plots, but the excessive blackening of the characters is, to be honest, very uncomfortable for me.

Really, I didn't want to watch it when the Sannin were Minato's disciples, and when Kushina was pregnant, Minato must have been the 4th generation, and if you act so unreasonably, Danzo would have harmed you long ago.

What the hell are you writing? Others are hiding their strength. You use experience cards to strengthen your strength. You are afraid that you will not die fast enough. With Danzo and Orochimaru here, you will be sliced ​​if you can survive like this...

If the author hasn't read Naruto, don't write random novels about Naruto, otherwise it will make a joke.

So stupid. Is a 2-year-old baby looking like a 5-year-old?