The Group's Favorite Junior Sister Is Weak but Can Fight

Messy Very messy At first I thought the plot was interesting The heroine is very curly, it's her nature that makes her so curly But there are many plot loopholes in it she jumped off the cliff Why did she become a cultivator and even outsiders thought she was her father? So there is a cliff below her house? Then go to the sect The heroine and her sister talked so much and no one heard them. But my sister was heard when she said she was being bullied. So fake Forget it all What's even more outrageous is that her age has really changed. A person with a bad memory like me I all remember when I first watched the heroine when she was 16 years old Then seven days later, she will be 19 years old? ! What's even more confusing is that she's going from Golden Elixir to Nascent Soul. After reaching Nascent Soul, it turned into a promotion golden elixir. It's really confusing Even though the heroine is very narcissistic, she is not internally dissatisfied But I flirt with people whenever I see them, even if they say it casually Don't you know that the people listening will take it seriously? ! Although the eldest brother and the demon are both the same person, But she didn't know that both sides were lying. Doesn't my heart really hurt? Both of them (actually the same person) treat her well She talks about people when she sees them, and talks about ghosts when she sees them. And it's really not pleasing to slander the other party. I like the heroine, she's real, but she's too mouthy The senior brothers were all coaxed by her to look like a sea king Forget it if you really are the King of the Sea He's obviously not the real King of the Sea, he doesn't even mean that. Just flirting everywhere is really unpleasant She was in love in a previous life, it's impossible not to see it Whoever likes her or not would be lying if he pretends not to know. After all, the heroine is a true academic and not stupid. So it was funny at first, but then it became really uncomfortable. It's only suitable for people with no brains, not those with brains.

Love should be sweet all the way, so sweet, super sweet, extremely sweet, unrivaled sweetness in the universe!

The plot is exciting! ! ! There are emotional lines and immortality paths, which are intertwined. It's not boring to watch, even very high-spirited. The only drawback is that there are many problems such as unclear sentences, inconsistent names, and typographical errors. I hope the author can correct them in his spare time. Thank you.

This book is really good. I originally followed the author because of the Queen's book. I tried to read the new book. I didn't expect it to be very good, but a little lacking. Great support for the author!

The heroine is like a social butterfly who doesn't understand emotions. The author is a woman. It's impossible to save strong women without CP. Do women have to be inseparable from men? As soon as I heard that the heroine is tired of men, I skipped the next level. It really disgusted me.

You don't need to write like this when you write about strong women, right? Isn't it offensive to have sex with the male protagonist just for the sake of double cultivation and improvement?

Waiting to become an old fan.

The heroine currently has a good friend. The good friend thinks that the heroine likes her. Although she wants to see Lily, she also wants to see men and women. Good book, recommendation, reminder

Very good-looking, and highly recommended to students who like to travel through time to cultivate immortality. It is from the golden elixir stage to the Nascent Soul stage, and then it is promoted from the Jindan stage to the Nascent Soul stage. Then it is finally promoted, and it still reaches the Nascent Soul stage. Did the author forget it after writing it?

There are too many typos. Sometimes it says 50 at the front and 40 at the end. This happens quite often.