Xuanhuan: From the Start, I Was Crippled, Then I Signed In at the Demon-Suppressing Tower for a Hundred Years!

It's so beautiful that I had a cerebral thrombosis after watching it. I've never seen such a beautiful lj thing before. It's so confusing. The male lead is like a moron and the rest are just s*x.

It doesn't look good, he's brainless in the front, forget about it, and he's stupid in the back. The most annoying thing about others is disturbing his practice. Those people have spread the news several times and won't kill them? You control them again, so should their news be spread out, or should it be spread out that all the people who disturb your cultivation are the ones they found, and your protagonist has no brains? Don't know how to analyze?

The author's setting of the protagonist was a bit messy at the beginning, but fortunately the plot is quite enjoyable. However, the author needs to learn to store and release it at the same time. If he only releases it, he will feel less happy. Moreover, the main plot line does not need to be drawn out so quickly. There can also be many branch lines. Interlacing the main lines and branches can make the article look more connotative. To summarize, the whole book is too idealistic. Some plot points could be better summarized. You can refer to "I Have God-Level Talent in Online Games".