
Immortality
长生不死
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 5.2M Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Cross-World
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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I was tricked into watching it by Douyin, because I believed in Douyin's recommendation and thought it was just the front that was bad, no, it was ugly. A time traveler with a high IQ placed the opportunity to change his destiny on a few adopted sons. If he hadn't betrayed me, I would have said that you would control people's hearts, but he betrayed him. The opening made me feel? ? ? ? Questioning face! Then there are adventures, all kinds of adventures. Still a pretty awesome adventure. I can tolerate this, after all, I am poor in cultivation, and it is difficult to get along without any adventure. However, only the protagonist can get adventures. He obviously has no strength at all, so he grabs things among various bosses. Just don't die, just play. All the female characters in the book are like being drugged, and they only like the old man protagonist who is set in the beginning. There is no emotional basis for liking the protagonist, which makes people unable to relate to and makes them feel disgusting. It is also written in a very loving way. Even more disgusting. (You still have to give your own character an innocent look) This is so disgusting! Then, there is no special description of the clone sent through time travel. It is said to be very powerful at the beginning, and then it is a tool man. Even those with high IQ didn't notice it at all, they just followed the settings. It doesn't feel very clever, but the opponent just follows the settings, hahaha! Don't watch it, it allows me to type so many words to complain. You can see how uncomfortable I feel being disgusted [smile]
How can I put it... It's the same as that one in So-and-So Cang Qiong who always encounters those who are stronger than him. Also, you write a male protagonist who is always weak and relies on his brain to work hard. He writes that others have no brains and others can't take that into consideration. I'm convinced. After seeing 70%, I finally understand why this work is so unbearable.
Pure water, all kinds of water. In the next chapter, I will retell the content of the previous chapter in a different way. I will treat the readers as fools and ask for monthly votes.
To be honest, I think it is a very good book, but the description of the protagonist is too exaggerated. Although merchants can be rich in the world, they cannot have the power to overthrow a country. The Daluo Dynasty actually allowed ministers to establish the Yun Dynasty. In ancient times, you are afraid that raising a few private soldiers would be a serious crime of beheading. If you directly establish the Yun Dynasty, what emperor can bear it?
Please do not create sages, especially villains such as Confucius. It is the moral values and values that we have learned since childhood. They are all treasures left by the sages, and they are all positive. It is also an important foundation for maintaining this identity as Chinese or Chinese.
How should I put it? A time-travel cultivator leads a national war in the mortal world, and modern strategies are stuffed into it. The scene looks very grand, with hundreds of millions of people fighting at every turn. I only see numbers, but in fact they are nothing. I can't watch it after chapter 30.
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Well, when productivity is extremely underdeveloped, it would be too much to spend decades secretly building a train. It would be too much to dig at least hundreds of miles of underground train tunnels. Even if you travel with a shield machine, you can't keep it secret, right?
The novel I read 10 years ago has a very novel subject matter. I used a flip phone to read pirated novels at that time. I reread it a few times and it was still very good. After reading it, it was written by the author fifteen years ago. Some people may not be able to read it now, but it does not cover up the fact that this novel was nb back then.
Men who stand at the top of the world bite their lips every now and then. It's really disgusting! The biggest failure of this book!