Beast Control: Parasitized by Spider Spirit at the Beginning

This book! It's really strange. The first bad thing is that the two worlds travel back and forth, and then the writing is not clear enough and a bit confusing, which makes the reading not very good. This is a point that discourages me. The second point is that the writing is actually quite good. Except for the bad points mentioned above, after reading it patiently, I found that the writing is really good. I was attracted to read the whole book. Recommendation index: ★★★★ (a book that can be read at a glance, not recommended for those with poor understanding)

…?／￣￣＼ ／＞ │ ／ ＞ (つ＿と＼＿＿／ ∪∪ ／￣￣ ＼ ＜´･＼…? | ３）＼ ＜･ ＼ ＼＿＿／∪_∪ ) ＵＵ Don't know what to say

1. You shouldn't engage in beast control. The little spider is very important in the article. It should be regarded as urban supernatural power or spiritual energy recovery. If you engage in beast control, those who like watching beast control will run away, or you can arrange more little spider plots. 2. Mysterious punctuation marks, especially periods, affect my reading. 3. The theme of traveling between two worlds is very good. In fact, I don't feel confused if I am used to watching this kind of theme. 4. I think the author's pace is very good and the level is good. If it is not in a hurry to finish, it can be written more than 400 chapters in the Qi training stage, more than 200 chapters in the foundation building, more than 400 chapters in the golden elixir Yuanying transformation into a god, and then write more than 100 chapters to the ending, and more than 1,000 chapters in the plot to make it a good work.

I have read half of the book, and the protagonist is still in the middle of Qi training. This novel is a mess, and the various settings in the middle are very confusing. It started with 1 and then changed to 2 without any explanation. There are also many settings that are not clearly written. I guess the author thought that he would just change it if it was wrong later. It is very funny. It is strange that the logic of the novel is not messed up after changing it.

Insufficient vocabulary and many language errors. It's a bit awkward to read. Nothing exciting.

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The more I write, the worse it gets.