When I Became a Son-In-Law, I Had No Choice but to Study and Become a Saint.

The protagonist in the author's works has an unpleasant personality. In the early stage, his fortune is low, so he acts boldly. In the later stage, wouldn't he be lawless? ? The people around you are suffering enough. This word count is the worst I have ever read, bar none. Since the evil cannot be reflected, why write about evil in such a large space?

It was interesting when I first started watching it. It doesn't matter if you study to become a saint, but your first volume will be about the scholars in the academy. You are not the best at studying now, so you are launching the second martial arts "Jianghu Volume"? Finished handling a few things in Jianghu. Is it the third volume of "Taomen Volume"? After that, he stabilized the Taoist sect and started writing about Confucianism and Taoism? ? ? It's too long-winded. Moreover, when you write about Confucianism and Taoism, don't demons and the like have no impact on the people of "Dali", the world of Dali, and the Taoist sect? Can Confucianism be the only way to fight against demons? Dao Sect, don't Jianghu need to take action? ? Also, the ultimate "Power of Nine Dragons" for a first-level warrior is the Nine Dragons? ? What is the concept of Nine Dragons? One dragon is a divine beast. The ultimate level of a first-grade warrior is the power of Nine Dragons. Those seventh-grade and eighth-grade warriors in the world must be so powerful. . (Confucianism and Taoism) have not reached their peak, so they have entered the world of martial arts (martial arts). It is estimated that the world of martial arts (martial arts) will not reach its peak, so it is time to write about (Taoism) again. The plot is too confusing. .

I am the author and I speak for myself!

This book is really good to read, with ups and downs in the plot and wonderful writing. It's really cool to see Xiao Fang grow up.

The overall novel is average, the plot description is confusing, and the writing is poor. Although he is an online article author, he is still a literary worker. Is his literary skills so poor? First of all, every time the protagonist upgrades, you must have all the skills he has. Let me say it again from the beginning. Where is your professional ethics? Such a low word count? If you can't continue writing, then stop writing. It's not suitable for eating this bowl of rice. Let's talk about the plot writing, this is a systematic writing, a systematic writing! What you wrote is like a fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. The protagonist still has to cultivate on his own? So what is the purpose of the system? Did you not write an outline at all? The more you write, the more chaotic it becomes, and it feels like your book is about to collapse. If you don't know how to write, don't write it. Go learn it first, okay? What you are doing is damaging your own reputation and your job. You don't even learn how to run. Do you want to imitate others and start running? Can you learn to write books from people who are good at writing? You can sort out the main line of the whole book by yourself. You can make an outline from beginning to end, and then add side stories. You have spread it out so much from the beginning. If you can't grasp everything, think about it yourself and abandon it.

To fill the cup. Press the reader down in the toilet and rub him. It disgusts me to death

It's okay, just don't write it to death. Updates are too slow. It would be nice if there were more updates at a time.

If you are uneducated and still learn to write Confucianism and Taoism, you might as well go to see the sages of Confucianism and Taoism. I can't stand the opening part of Shui Tiao Song. You say it's okay to be pregnant with your deceased father. You say you miss the heroine. I'm speechless. Why are you so mean? . . .

I keep opening the system and looking at the panel. I have to write down the invalid skills again every time, just to make up for the word count.

No wonder the rating is so low. It should be. I can't understand the author's brain circuit. The writing is very awkward. It forces trouble for the protagonist and adds various difficulties. It has a system. I still don't understand that stability is needed after promotion. You rely on system upgrades and still need stability? Promotion is also slow