Galaxy Magician

Learn a lesson, respect the fruits of other people's work, and give them all praise. I have read about a hundred chapters and feel good. But after the federation split, I couldn't stand it anymore, and I didn't know what it was about. I was breached, so I just gave up.

A little loli lived a good life before meeting the protagonist, but after meeting the protagonist, she was described as a drag, a weakness, a flower vase... This kind of plot is too watery. No one can sand, and even the Magician of the Galaxy, water is nothing but water.

Unique and unique🐯...

As an old bookworm, after reading a third of the book, I felt it was still readable, but there were a lot of typos at the end.

He Yingying is the biggest flaw of this book. The more I read it, the more disgusting I feel.

It looks good, but there are too many typos! Too much! ! It affects reading too much

The little loli who opens her mouth and keeps her mouth shut, but her name is also missing. There are still bugs before and after the article. In the last chapter, it was about breaking through to level 16, and in the next chapter, the experience bar in the library will increase. People are also more intelligent. If they have questions, they don't ask them and just keep mumbling in their hearts. At first, I felt that this article was too detailed to introduce the background, but later I realized that the number of words was too low. The weapon technology system is as bland as water. The author is not so creative in writing new systems. They are all leftover sugarcane bagasse. If you can't write about things between men and women, don't write about it. The woman acts cute and protects the man's beauty. I don't know, I thought the two junior high school students were in love. There is no adult look at all.

Holy Mother + Dog Licking Article.

Don't say it, the central idea is there, but something is missing, but the description of the younger sister is very deliberate, a child who is not sensible, how could he not be sensible after more than ten years in the garbage dump, and can't understand his own position clearly, and don't say that I have typos in my typing, the author has more typos than me.

The author is definitely a lolita! Every chapter should be written about a little loli! ! Little loli! ! ! Why can't I write without this loli heroine? The only function is to touch the male protagonist's head in his arms, right?