The Commoner Who Became a Hero

When I read Chapters 14 to 15, I didn't really want to read on. I'll tell you my feelings personally. There is a sense of déjà vu as a tool man: The protagonist comes back from the beginning, and someone is looking for trouble - asking for money! The protagonist shows his strength and attacks with an insect. The beggar brings a bandit. The bandit is weak and gets dumped. Then I will give you the tiger, I will take the money, and I will take the test again. Does the protagonist have a brain? Of course there is, after all, he was a scholar when he was a child, and he was very powerful, but this is the original after time travel. The heroine has a personality, she seems to have said nothing throughout the whole process, just like an NPC. The protagonist seems to be exactly like the one who does the tasks in the game. After completing the task, he then runs directly. I feel like there is no way to run up. I wonder if the author had this feeling when he was writing?

Nowadays, many books just open up the halo of the protagonist and do it directly. Then the villain also does it directly. It is clear that he can slap the protagonist to death, but he confronts the protagonist openly. The villain acts like a gentleman, just like hundreds of people surround an unarmed man, but in the end he has to fight alone and give up another hand, and is killed in the end. There is no wisdom at all.

There is nothing new. If you want to fight a tiger, you will come to the Marquis. Then you will take the Juren exam. The Marquis invites you to fight. What kind of brain can you write like this? It can't be obscene and developed? Just come to Lord Marquis to hunt a tiger. How much leisure do you have to make your balls ache? Do you have to take the exam like everyone else? Can you be a little creative?

This novel is very well written. I hope one day a screenwriter and director will appreciate it and make it into a TV series or something.

What rubbish, the person who took the examination was actually from the county examination. I wonder if the author didn't understand how the imperial examination was conducted.

The writing is poor, the logic has loopholes, and everything reveals that you just sit there and do whatever you want. Can't stand it.

The logic doesn't make sense. I vomited after reading more than 50 chapters. Luo Liba has been trying to figure out the word count. It's so water-water-water-water.

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After a lonely journey, I couldn't understand some of the details of defending the city, let alone those cities with high walls and thick walls. The defenders just used kerosene, rolling wood and other things to defend casually, but they were able to stretch the distance anyway.

What rubbish! A talented scholar was bullied at will before time travel, but after time travel, he has many fans. What's wrong? Didn't the ancients see people jumping into the river? Do you think he's great at jumping into the river? Is it reasonable for a weak scholar to shoot arrows when he comes up? No matter how awesome you are, your body can keep up? Also add a front sight, why don't you add a compound bow?