Starting with Dual Kamui: I, Obito, Will Become Hokage!

How can I put it... The book is not bad, but compared with the Obito fanfiction I have read before, such as Sister Juan's book, it is still far behind. First of all, the plot is very bland and has no spark. Secondly, in terms of characterization, I don't really appreciate the indecisive character of the male protagonist. You can obviously kill the enemy instantly but you still have to talk a lot of nonsense. The other characters also seem to have lost their wits. They add up to less than half a brain. The last thing that makes me speechless the most is that the writing style is awkward. If you are not good at martial arts, you can pay more attention to literary drama! As a result, I read half of the book and didn't read anything that looked like a drama. Moreover, sometimes the scary vocabulary made me dig out Barbie's Dream House with my toes! Overall, don't read it with your head in mind…

Very nice to look at.

Nice

The writing on flirting with women is so good, so don't mind if I give a bad review.

I really like it, especially the scenes between Kurenai and Obito.

It's good to watch, the author does a good job in fighting, and the plot is also humorous.

What do you say about this novel? Poor writing. The plot is poor. The characterization is also very poor. The only advantage of being very vulgar is that it makes up for the pitfalls in the hearts of Naruto fans. Otherwise, who would come to see this thing? Just for fun.

Anyone?

It is close to the original work, the changes are reasonable, and the content is interesting.

I really admire this author. The prototype of Hanzo's Sanshou Fish is the real giant salamander, and the shelled clam is the mirage of the ghostly lantern and the moon.