Daming: I Asked You to Provide Disaster Relief, but You Put Sand in the Pot?

The whole thing is just the emperor yelling mindlessly, shouting to kill the protagonist without looking at the reason. There are hundreds of pictures and he still keeps being prejudiced and thinking about killing him. What the hell is this? I'm tired of watching it.

The musket appears like this, isn't the protagonist afraid of death? The emperor can tolerate the existence that threatens the imperial power

A routine is used from beginning to end. The emperor's IQ is so weak that it is hard to imagine how he rebelled and gained the throne. It's no wonder that people abandon the article after just one look.

I personally find it uncomfortable to watch. It affects my mood and gives you a bad review.

Just "horse riding on Kyoto to admire the falling cherry blossoms" is worthy of a good review

Good guy, is Zhu Yuanzhang so brainless? I almost have three pounds of water in my brain after writing this...

First of all, the method of writing the protagonist is very well-founded, and the content is very real; but your character creation is unreal: 1. The protagonist is such a smart person, and Zhu Yuanzhang has exposed his real name so many times without telling him. It's okay that you didn't tell him, there is no sign of awareness at all, what are you doing? Officials and ministers did not have any doubts; 2. Was Zhu Yuanzhang suffering from mania? If you are not used to watching this all day long, who cares about such violent national affairs? Just once or twice, all day long. "Zhu Yuanzhang's expression froze, and he suddenly yelled..." It's disgusting. The first one was trusting and happy, and the next one immediately changed his face. I know I need to shape the character, but you went too far; 3. It's hard work for the author to code, but can you stop so many typos? An average of several paragraphs per paragraph. I don't want to read a novel and have to decipher your typos. I don't even ask you to write a chapter and review one chapter, but if you finish writing a sentence and read it, it will not make sense. Really, I strongly recommend that you put everything you've ever written through the review process. I read the previous one and rated it as good, but I was really disappointed. Everyone's bad reviews basically focused on these three points. You, the author, know a lot about this kind of governance method, but can you carefully carve the text? Even though some of the protagonist's methods made my eyes shine, as soon as I saw the typos and the protagonist's general portrayal of Zhu Yuanzhang, I immediately lost my sense of immersion. But I dare say that if you change the previous part and solve these three small problems, then this book will definitely become a hit.

Love this book! Very interesting! Always makes me laugh! Isn't reading a book just for fun? It's worth reading

Write more, it's simply not enough to read🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Everyone is a smart person. Only Zhu Yuanzhang was written as zz by you. You are not writing about Zhu Yuanzhang, you are describing yourself. I admire you.