Developing the Nation Through Technology: You Said We Were Fishing, So Why Are You Building a Star Destroyer?

Basically the same plot.

Overall, it's okay. As a new military book, it can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. However, the biggest problem is that it is too long to talk nonsense and express feelings between the characters. Sometimes, most of a chapter is just chatting between the characters. I know that the novel must be relaxed and relaxed. It turns out that when I read Dragon Clan, I liked the old Jiangnan villain to say a few bad words in key plot points, so that the article has both humor and excitement of the plot (after all, it is not unreasonable for the Dragon Clan to become gods). However, many of the dialogues and humor in this book do not fit in with the plot, so it reads very stiffly. Moreover, this is an online text after all, not a physical book. Most people use mobile phones. When they see such long dialogues, they just scroll down (sometimes I do the same). It is possible to accidentally miss key information. So I hope to make the article more concise and pay attention to the coordination between the relaxed parts. I'm not saying this to spite myself. I wouldn't write such a long review if I wanted to give it a bad review. I'm just giving some suggestions. I hope the author will write better as he writes.

Nice

This kind of technological system must be cool, right? The dialogue can fill three chapters. How did the score of 9.2 Come about? Too watery. There is also the missile thing about Chapter 100 or so. Obviously someone familiar with the situation is nearby. What kind of experts are allowed to question the protagonist? Key. Questioned a chapter. That general said it was this little kid who made the missile. The protagonist falls into a coma from exhaustion for five chapters. You can get someone to have a conversation for five chapters. Sharp. Sharp. Really good at water.

Forget it, I won't attack anymore. The first 60 chapters are really poisonous to me, and I said it will be better in the later chapters... As a result, I am not in the mood to read all day today, alas.

Not enough, not enough

Everyone who reads this novel to me is dumbfounded. You are so tolerant. People with weak hearts should not read the first 60 chapters. They are poisonous to death.

No common sense. The heavy machine gun is controlled by computer. Have you played too many computer shooting games? The young genius protagonist is clearly a true fairy protagonist. Computer-controlled machine guns require complex calculations of ballistic trajectories. The bullet has not yet been tested for shooting accuracy, and the shot can still hit. It is recommended that the protagonist control the heavy machine gun in the early stage and shoot wildly, and the later players can control the trajectory to hit the pirates.

Don't worry about reading novels. Just make sure there are as few typos as possible. Don't worry about it.

Another verbose novel written by Luo Liba