Prince Xiaoyao of the Ming Dynasty Shocked Lao Zhu at the Beginning

Very poorly written

I gave up decisively when I saw the first word "I".

At least there should be no mistakes in typing when publishing an article. It was fine before chapter 300. But what the hell is Wang Er? Most of Lao Zhu's catchphrases are "We". It's a bit stingy for you to write "I". It's easy to get into trouble. Why don't the author review the article after 300 chapters instead of Zhu Gui and Wang Er? If your book doesn't have a system, don't make it too awesome. You can use a train or a pistol or something, or you can give the protagonist a system. There will be no problem. It's just that there is no system for time travel. It's too exaggerated.

I didn't even understand it. That's it.

It was good to read at the beginning, but gradually some foreshadowing was provided, which was no longer needed later, and the chapters jumped a bit. All in all, my self-feeling is not systematic and I follow the author's lead.