One Piece's Great Ancient Becomes Soup

After reading fifty or sixty chapters, the character of this protagonist makes me feel very strange. I am always embarrassed about this and embarrassed about that. For example, if he didn't go to the island that the old ship's doctor asked him to go to, why didn't he go? After all, he was also looking for the crew, so he just said he hadn't arrived. Isn't that the right direction? I've been holding it for a long time and can't say anything. This makes the protagonist a fool. Can't he fly and have a flying thunder god? It takes a while to get over it. The plot is too bland and makes people less and less appetizing as they watch it.

Automatically? I didn't even touch it😂😂😂😂

Generally speaking, it is good. The early stage is too bland, Rayleigh's recruitment of disciples is a bit confusing, the master's wife and senior brother also feel too abrupt, too modern world address, and in terms of strength, the depiction of combat power is a bit broken, and the character creation does not look like a social animal in his thirties. Oh no, plus the few years of rebirth, he should be in his forties. Also, Robin is six years old and doesn't know much about love. Doesn't he blush? The subject matter is relatively new. Overall, it can reach an eighth score. It is very difficult to go up. Come on, author. I have listed only the problems I have seen so far. Let's see what happens next.

It looked good but suddenly fell apart.

The plot is bland, just like reading a composition, there are few exciting parts, and it's still unfinished🌚

It sucks

It's not good to watch, and it ends with an eunuch for no reason.