Seven Hundred Years of Cultivation, Reborn in the City and Invincible

Hahaha, this novel is just about the Jiang family. I just wrote so many chapters. I keep writing nonsense. If you want to kneel down and apologize, kneel down and apologize. Be more direct. There is so much nonsense and it will not look good if you write too much nonsense...

Some novels are so wild and unrealistic that they give you a sense of immersion! But reading this novel feels like a brag...

He who is decisive in killing is like a virgin, a licking dog who can't walk when he sees a woman.

Luoliba talks a lot of nonsense, and if he blows off his 700-year-old self-cultivation experience, he will blow up the aircraft carrier at every turn. You say he is a weakling who can kill his whole family and kill gods at every turn. You say he is powerful. People around him can be beaten to death by his opponents at any time without stopping, and he can be bullied and suppressed by others without giving a shit. If you pretend to be B too much, you will have to rebirth after spending 700 cultivating immortals.

First, it's too wordy. Second, poor logical thinking

I feel like you could write more of this nonsense! The best is the deeds of every unrelated little person in the last 18 generations! Write the future of the next three generations! You can have more words!

What a bad book, the protagonist is too arrogant.

It's a quick read, but I don't recommend wasting your time watching it anyway.

What the hell? I just wrote that and became Naruto. What about "Eight Gate Dunjia - King Gate - Open"? How about another "Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire - Qinglian Transformation", "Impression of Life and Death - Open", "Seventh Soul Technique - Martial Soul True Body"

This book is really speechless. At first, I thought it was written by AI because it was so verbose. After listening to a few more chapters, I felt that it might not be AI. AI cannot write so many sick sentences. . . The logic is that there is no foreshadowing at all, and everything you think about comes out later. For example, the appearance of Xuanmen is purely to open a new copy, and Daomen. At the beginning, any one that comes out is said to be one of the best. Until the Centipede and the God of War of the North and South come out, it is still one of the best, the real core. . It was baffling. Every time you get excited during a fight, you pinch your penis like an ant, but when you fight, it's 6/4, it's the same with vegetables, and it's the same with cows. You have to finish it off after you've had enough. Of course, I think the thing that deserves the most criticism is the writing. Writing shortcoming 1: Even the simplest sentences cannot be made fluently. For example, I particularly like to use 'carry on', and even when looking at each other, I have to use 'carry on to look at each other'. There are many confusing ways of using it. Another example is 'the whole world'. . . I am very confused, what level of language skills can use Chinese like this? Writing shortcoming 2: Idioms are used indiscriminately. What impressed me most is that there is a place where the word "belittle oneself" is used, which is similar to "X dares to belittle oneself". It is used to express that X is too generous. It is very confusing. Will the idiom be used? ? Writing shortcoming 3: The title issue is even more speechless. When you go to your idol's house and face your idol's parents, can you just call your father-in-law? ? Even if you call me uncle or aunt, you are still better than your father-in-law. This is particularly speechless. Every time a younger brother sees the protagonist's parents, they always talk about their father-in-law. . . Writing shortcoming 4: Repeated writing and repeated descriptions, such as a cultivator who has been practicing for more than 700 years. . . Really speechless.