The Beast Comes Down the Mountain, and the Girl in the City Suffers an Old Crime!

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Written in Shiyi

This kind of novel is okay! The content is vivid and detailed. I love watching it!

I have read about half of the 220th chapter so far. Let me complain here. 1. First of all, in terms of subject matter, it is a normal Shuangwen routine, a matryoshka-style show-off and slap in the face, which is very common in Shuangwen. However, the main plot of this novel seems to be very slow at present (it can also be understood that there is basically no main plot, at least half of it has not been revealed much). 2. Then there is the character, the male protagonist is a dog licker + eunuch, and likes to provoke women in various ways. Yeah, this is the most disgusting kind. It's better to accept a few more and change them into stallion stories. He doesn't accept or refuse. He does everything without breaking the last layer. He licks the heroine for real. It feels like a lack of love. The heroine can move him for a long time just by saying something to him. It's not like the character design given to the male protagonist at the beginning. He is not decisive in killing. You want to say that it is not easy to kill people in urban novels, but in the end he kills them all. He has to grind for a long time before killing. The female protagonist is even more unlikable. She has nothing but good looks. She doesn't have high trust in the male protagonist. She believes everything others say, and she doesn't give the male protagonist a chance to explain every time (there must be a period of misunderstanding). The CEO doesn't have the brains of a CEO. I can't solve this problem but I still like to move forward. If it weren't for the fact that I have been raped no less than ten times in the novel, and I still think that others are not that bad like a virgin. As of Chapter 220, my strongest ability is to intercede for the enemy. To be honest, there are not many female supporting characters who are likable. 3. Let's talk about the plot, let's talk about the advantages first. The combat power has not collapsed so far, and the plot is still good when viewed from a relaxed perspective. Let's talk about the shortcomings: there are too many kidnapping series. One is kidnapped to save another and then continues to be kidnapped and rescued. This is useless to complain about. Then, if there is a single female protagonist, the novel will use force to make up for the highlights. This novel is too bland. There is no jealousy plot with multiple female protagonists and no force value to advance the growth curve of the main plot. It looks very dull. 4. In terms of writing, the sentences should be smooth. Although it is a bit simple in terms of characterization and combat description, at least there are not many typos, so you can still read it for relaxation. Ps: The above are just reflections, you can refer to them or ignore them.

Alas, the dog-licking article. Dissuaded

Four chapters are required every day. One chapter is too few and not stable.

Too much nonsense. Stop when you see it!

Can a woman like this be the president? Speechless!

What is Xiao Ran's identity?

What is written. The heroine is written with no brains and no opinions at all. I really can't stand it.