Create a Super Mecha at the Beginning, Shocking the School Beauty

Not bad, good book! When I first came in, I saw the introduction and wanted to leave. I read the reviews and they all said it was good, so I just watched it. It's really good! The system here has a very low sense of existence, and it's good that the protagonist gets technology instead of ready-made products. It feels like it's perfect to have a single female protagonist (it would be great if both male and female protagonists like technology). There are too many exchanges in this novel, and it would be better if there were less 😄

What the heck, the subject matter is pretty good, but why are all the villains so clever? You can just write about fighting aliens, but you have to make a lot of senseless plots. The representative is that the rich second generation destroyed the protagonist's house because of the woman, and the protagonist didn't pay much attention to him, but the rich second generation ruined the whole family and ruined the protagonist. I can accept this. You write a story where the protagonist goes to save someone, but the protagonist is seriously injured but the person is not saved, and then her son hates her? (The protagonist also informed in advance that there would be an earthquake, and saved his father and his younger brother, but failed to save his mother.) What a really evil plot, does his mother have to blame the protagonist for not listening to him? Can the villain plot use some snacks?

Okay, okay, I hope I won't be a bad writer in the future

Hope it's not bad

Nice

Chapter 15 is very poisonous

Childish

The strong intelligent robot Xiaohang has the ability to think independently, that is, it has the same ability as Ultron, and the mecha technology of Gundam. When the protagonist is transmitted transformation knowledge by the system, it should be a comprehensive technology branch rather than a single one. There should be many extended applications, such as nuclear energy. And the application of artificial intelligence to cities, etc. After more than 40 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The author's plot is too limited. Not to mention the childish rich second-generation plot and the awkward character relationships, let's just say that when you introduce household robots, you actually consider disaster rescue applications first. How can there be so many earthquakes waiting for you to perform! Isn't it flight, transportation, protection, services, smart living and a wave of unemployment. Flying robots will first cause the automobile and aircraft industries to collapse, and there will be employment problems. The manufacturing and service industries will be completely replaced, and then financial aspects and even international relations will immediately become a big problem. It can be said that such robots will have countless huge impacts on the entire world if they are released without preparation. Moreover, there is no control from above. If this really happens, the country will have to deal with social stability. Of course, it would be fine if I wrote a cool article, but I really can't stand it anymore and I have to say a few words, which shows how boring it is.

The technical details are good, but the writing style needs to be improved.

There are so many typos that I can't stand it anymore.