The Years When I Became a Great Immortal

It's quite good, with foreshadowing and delicate descriptions. The author's logical thinking is very clear. Each plot is heart-stirring, sometimes nervous, sometimes scary, and sometimes happy. The traction is very strong. I hope the author will continue to work hard!ヾ(^▽^*)))

The first and middle chapters are quite coherent and the plot is good, but the last few chapters are a bit unsatisfactory. But it's also remarkable. I personally read books relatively quickly, and I read the entire book in a few days. Some places are very scary and thrilling. The usual conversations with Lao Bai are also in line with the temperament of Northeastern people. But Lao Bai is too stunned and will do whatever he wants at every turn. It makes me angry to death. I really want to give Lao Bai a brick... Then again, he moves bricks... Hahaha, anyway, I have never seen anyone using bricks as a magic weapon. But it's interesting to think about him shooting ghosts with bricks, hahahahaha

The writing is very good. It would be great if I could meet a divine man. It feels very good.

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Want to see the follow-up. And is the author really a trickster? Is Lao Bai really from Nanmao?

It's nice to watch, but I think the heroine's presence is a bit low.

The ending is too hasty, this is too hasty, right?

Very good. Continue.

It's very interesting to watch. The plot is compact and not draggy. I finished it in a short time. It's so enjoyable to watch.

Very good, I like it very much