Naruto Sign-In: I Asked You to Get Stronger, Not Beat the Entire Shinobi World

Nice

It's a bit messy.

It's okay, but the ending is too quick!

The writing style is like that of a primary school student, and the image of the characters is too different from the original text. Naruto fans are advised not to read it. This is just the setting of Long Aotian.

Exciting, passionate, and youthful

Simply good

Just two points, personal opinion. The first is to become the disciple of the Sandaime Hokage, which is awkward no matter how you look at it. Second, use the chakra of the elite jounin + two secret techniques to fight head-on with the third generation Raikage, and break through to the Kage level to kill the Raikage. It's strange to watch. In my opinion, Raikage is synonymous with invincibility in the three battles. It's understandable to kill him through plot, and there's no shame in being defeated after fighting for a while. Killing him in a head-on fight and breaking through before the battle is really not as good as killing him in plot.

No wonder the score is high. It turns out to be Qimao's original work. If everything has a few words, there will be no low score...

It's great. It's rare to see a novel that suits my taste here.

The setting is all kinds of chaos: one moment it is said that Habirama is faster than the Third Raikage, almost the fastest in the ninja world. After a while, the protagonist's attack is casually dodged. The Third Raikage, who is slower than the protagonist, is not so good! The protagonist said it was a celestial being, and he would be exhausted after killing seven or eight thousand Iwa-nins. Hashirama's celestial body was not that good. Madara, who stole Hashirama's senshi's human body, roamed the battlefield of a hundred thousand ninja troops. Even the Third Raikage who did not have a celestial body was consumed to death after killing tens of thousands of rock ninjas. The protagonist's celestial body is not as good as the third generation Raikage? The protagonist's name is Ye Jian, and he is often renamed "Su Yang" by the author (can't remember clearly). This is very confusing! In order to highlight the protagonist, the author wrote everyone else as weaklings. In the original work, Tsunade, who suppressed Chiyo, was almost beaten to death by Chiyo. Can it be more ridiculous?