Xunlong Celestial Master

The plot is grand, the rhythm is tight but has relaxed relaxation periods, and there are many foreshadowings. The psychological description of the characters is very detailed, and the images of the characters are very clear, but some are a bit formulaic. I hope they can make detailed distinctions. Although there are a lot of typos.

This is a life saver, brother, can you use your brain before doing anything? Don't do what grandma always does in a moment of anger. If you hadn't been lucky, you would have died a few times? How about cherishing your own life? How about cherishing your grandma's efforts? When you meet a girl, you are heartbroken. I can understand your heartbeat, but your grandma's heartbeat is your heartbeat. Can you do things through your head? Is your own head in your neck? I've got a roof over my butt, can you please settle down first? The kindness is not unrequited, the time has not come yet, kiss me. The Li family should stop doing stupid things, but after all, your grandma said you can help, okay, let's help, we can help, but can we look a little backbone? I saw a sister taking a bath and giving you a haircut. Brother, you are not a newborn, you are a human being. Don't act like an animal. Please clean yourself and have some moral character of your own. I saw what a greedy sister has become. You didn't stop when it was time to stop. As soon as Zhu's sister shed tears, good guy, your brain suddenly stopped and you were about to fight for your life. Think about it, even if I surrender to you, you didn't stop when you should. Seeing the big monster after your grandma left, you couldn't do anything. There are also inside Do you dare to take a look at what is written about the female character? She is a typical template girl. She actually felt very sweet when she saw her sisters. You feel like "Oh, my brother is having a wedding with someone else. It hurts. You should have a wedding with me." Are you okay? How long have we known each other? It's normal to pity and maintain good feelings. Is it normal for a girl to go directly to the bridal chamber and look shy😅😅😅😅😅😅😅. How noble and awesome you are. It seems that both men and women have been stereotyped by you. Men can't escape the dominance of the lower body. Women want to get married when they see good men. Don't make the characters so stereotyped. What is your own mentality? Fast food can be fast, but you can't use fingernails as ingredients. I don't know you are a man. The writer is still a female writer, and I don't want to beat you to death for being a certain gender, but think about it for yourself. What you write cannot stand up to scrutiny. It is really like fast food. You can't even taste it after chewing it. I am a lover of protagonists. If you want to write more in the future, don't write the protagonist as a newbie who doesn't think. Thank you.

Poker Characters Jack of Spades: Attendant of Charles I, Hokra the Dane Jack of Hearts: Lahaia, the court attendant of Charles VII Jack of Clubs: King Arthur's famous knight Lancelot Jack of Diamonds: Roland, squire of Charles I Q of Spades: Pallas Athena, the goddess of wisdom and war in ancient Greek mythology Queen of Hearts: Jules, German, wife of Charles I Queen of Clubs: Queen of York, the Lancastrian royal family of England Q of Diamonds: It is the sister of Joseph in the Bible and the Old Testament, Queen Laker K of Spades: David, the father of King Solomon of Israel in the 10th century BC, was good at playing the harp King of Hearts: Charles I, Frank King Salman King of Clubs: Alexander the Great of Macedonia, the earliest go-vern-ment in the world K of Diamonds: The famous Roman general and politician Giuseppe Caesar, who became the dictatorial ruler after the unification of Rome.

I'm going crazy. I've never wanted to criticize a book so much. The protagonist really looks like a fool. He's not pretending to be stupid, he's really stupid. I was reading a book and wanted to relax, but I ended up feeling a burning sensation in my stomach😡😡😡

Too slow

After reading more than 200 photos, the supporting characters risked their lives at every turn, and the protagonist could incite the crowd with just a few words. The grandson of the majestic Heavenly Medicine Goddess said that if you learn the Heavenly Medicine skills well, you can make a name for yourself in the Feng Shui circle. Oh, but in the end, people made all kinds of comments in a fourth-tier small city. The heroine's reasons are also far-fetched, but it may be foreshadowing, but in the end it seems that she is the same as she wrote. I will comment after reading other reviews.

If you don't understand suspense, why don't you call it suspense? Go next door to watch the crooked-mouthed God of War. You're pretending to be stupid just to show off. I even wonder if you're blind. The first chapter tells you to pretend to be stupid and deceive. Use your gills to breathe. Go watch the crooked-mouthed Dragon King. Don't be disgusting.

The character of the protagonist is so bad, it's just sperm that fills the brain... It's really a brainless act, and can the lady named Zhu die first... What I want to see the most in the whole book is her death... Everyone in the book is emotional... It's so disgusting...

The author is naughty and likes to show off, and there are a lot of typos... The plot is quite good.

Did the author want to write about a stallion or something? Why is the male protagonist so merciless? He was stunned at one moment and was stunned at another. There were a lot of typos and wrong names. The writing was so bad that even the children had clearer logic than the author.